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There were several golden opportunities to make this outstanding story-line much sexier than it is. More full body shots, especially in the "getting-gassed" scene. An great looking fully body "arm carry" could have been offered. The best shot out of all 14 frames is the last one, she's waking up but still curled up on the floor. As is way too often the case, the writing is superb, but the graphic depictions leave much to be desired. What a shame.
In spite of all this, it's still worth four stars if only for the last pic.
Feb 03, 2010
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